Nov. 16 Part II
The first draft of the fight scene sucks. I’m not talking about fixing it with some minor edits and tweaking. I’m talking it falls into every rotten girl fight cliché and is laughably bad.
I’m not tossing it – I’m saving it to share with my writing workshops about how NOT to do something.
But I am starting over again as far as what I’ll submit to the editor.
Sometimes things just don’t work. So you break it down and start over.
Will try to restart it before running for the train.
Gosh darn it.