Thursday, August 11, 2005

Aug. 11 Part II

Worked on the calendar article. Need to cut 176 words. Much of that will come in the general tightening. First thing to do is get rid of qualifiers. No waffling words – only active, definite ideas.

Will put it away for a few hours so I can edit later with fresh perspective.

D.

PS They’re mowing the asphalt again out there. Celtic harp music didn’t cut it. So I have on a CD called Exotic Divas. Their vocal power is far greater than a mere machine's.

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